Black Pantyhose Negligee Showdown #9

This is the kind of story I would like to see more often in your gallery: a strip fight! Staging the skirmish in some sort of grand Renaissance/Baroque hall is an ingenious choice: it contrasts delightfully with the debauched action playing out in the foreground! As for the fight itself, I think it shows promise...but I have one complaint. The girls look too blasé about the matter, and neither one appears to be trying particularly hard. But the composition still manages to tell an entertaining story: the negligee girl on the left has taken the advantage, stripping off a little more than has been stripped from her; however, her rival is not backing down and is digging in her claws, seemingly unintimidated by the fact that her slip is firmly in her enemy's clutches and dangerously close to being pulled down further! I predict a narrow victory for the girl on the right due to sheer determination, but neither of these two is walking away with much decorum left! Good ideas and skillful storytelling here, but your technique does need a bit of work. Not complaining much, though!